A lil visual novel im making (UPDATE #1)

the art is being done in a different program but the ui and programming and everything else is done in wick editor. lemme know what you think! :)

file is too big so here’s a google drive link:

UPDATE #1
added new scenes and a title card! it ends right after the title card and it just goes black because i forgot to add a little “end of demo” note or whateves lol

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Good! I liked it a lot! Also, here’s some feedback, when the text is like, appearing, make the “fade in” effect slower, since it kinda makes me dizzy.

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i updated it :)

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I didnt play it yet but here’s a suggestion, instead of uploading your update as a different message, you can press the edit button and upload your update there! :) image

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Wow! this is super well made, I just came back from my roblox adventure journey, and I’m working on a visual novel which is going to take a long time. As it has a complex story, and I’m working on my drawing skills as I’m terrible at drawing