Does this look good?

#1

I’m making a short film right now and these are the main characters, is there anything I should change?

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#2

@FroggyWadd you should make the outline for the small ball smaller I think it would look good

#3

Does this look better?

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#4

@FroggyWadd yes it looks pretty good nothing else looks off I think its good

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#5

Thank you :D

#6

idk man there is something about those eyes man

#7

How should I change them

#8

i couldn’t help you but something about it scares me

#9

How does it scare you?

#10

please don’t tell me im the only one who sees evil in those eyes

#12

Does this look better?IMG_0986

#13

I’m joking this is the real one
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#14

i knew it‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎

#15

Does the new one look better?

#16

@FroggyWadd I think it looks better with the bloody eyes

#17

Lol, sadly i can’t use it for the short film I’m making

#18

@FroggyWadd thats sad

#19

low-key reminds me of riddle school

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#20

You know, it does remind me a lot of riddle school

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#21

Yeah, maybe if I make a horror spinoff of the short film I can add him

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