A big thing to make it better is first of all don’t make it to repetitive, I saw that you really only used 2 main parts, that does not mean of repeating something is bad, but doing it to often isn’t really good The second one is it’s mainly only 1 instrument, causing it not to sound really nice. Here is a little sample song I made(it is only really one part so it doesn’t showcase how not to be too repetitive)https://www.beepbox.co/#9n31s0k2l00e03t2ma7g0fj07r1i0o432T0v3u10f0qg01d04w2h0E0T0v2u10f0qg01d04w2h0E0T8v0u1af10r9q012d02x670W7E0T2v3u15f10w4qw02d03w0E0b4h400000000h4g000000014h000000004h400000000p2180aq_ikkknkkk09uCLXuR-AMGA3dvUDDF-BCcaq_Ow1pEPfkPryqcJdujITjdtXuPITjdtXo0
This isn’t the best example because I did it in like 10 minutes, but it get’s the job done
this is a whole lot better! but idk what advice to give