Free beepbox song

it sucks so you don’t need to credit me https://ultraabox.github.io/#u5N08Untitledn400s0k02l00e0ft1Ua7g0fj07r1O_U00000000i0o3213T1v0pu25f0000q0A010v3000O0d080A5F4B0Q444nPc696R0000E2c0ba63aT1v0pu01f0000qwB18310O01d000A5F5B9Q4445PfaedR0000E4c0b962863979T1v0pu92f030o21962pc00q0B010w0000O0ld160A8F4B3Qn54dP5a93R0000E2c0bc63cT0v0pui1f0000q040O0d030wq1h0y000000000005fA000000E0c0b4x8i4x8i4x8h4icz8Ocz8N4h000w000000000100000p226FyUwi8IwbgEM8Jcmg5EAt2Cbk5EkqwJclxyWoEJgkzFyWaMbk5EkGEJ4mAbh8Wt8mwbgAa9iCkWx60IcU_4icFopvA0jbj8Y7hGccn1Gm6tfEhD4LcFRC0AdpzoSdONtRw0000|https://file.garden/Z5LWNmBsKDyHFNpn/sonic%201/title%20lead%202.wav|https://file.garden/Z5LWNmBsKDyHFNpn/genesisf2/Power%20-%20DrumCrackersSnare.wav

A big thing to make it better is first of all don’t make it to repetitive, I saw that you really only used 2 main parts, that does not mean of repeating something is bad, but doing it to often isn’t really good The second one is it’s mainly only 1 instrument, causing it not to sound really nice. Here is a little sample song I made(it is only really one part so it doesn’t showcase how not to be too repetitive)https://www.beepbox.co/#9n31s0k2l00e03t2ma7g0fj07r1i0o432T0v3u10f0qg01d04w2h0E0T0v2u10f0qg01d04w2h0E0T8v0u1af10r9q012d02x670W7E0T2v3u15f10w4qw02d03w0E0b4h400000000h4g000000014h000000004h400000000p2180aq_ikkknkkk09uCLXuR-AMGA3dvUDDF-BCcaq_Ow1pEPfkPryqcJdujITjdtXuPITjdtXo0

This isn’t the best example because I did it in like 10 minutes, but it get’s the job done

now give advice for this
kinda also meh but not as much

https://ultraabox.github.io/#u5N08Untitledn310s0k02l00e0dt2La7g0fj09r1O_U00000000i0o431T0v0pui0f0000q040O0d030wp1h0y000000000002pk000000E0c0T1v0pu73f010o900q050O0ad030A3F0B2Qan45Pc52cR0000E3c061c622638T7v0bu20f021562ka00q0B010s1000O0ld080H_SRJ6JIBxAAAAkh8IbE1c0b1T4v0ouf0f1a0q050O01z8888onapap4oSBKSJJAArriiiiii07JCABrzrrrrrrr00YrkqHrsrrrrjr005zrAqzrjzrrqr1jRjrqGGrrzsrsA099ijrABJJJIAzrrtirqrqjqixzsrAjrqjiqaqqysttAJqjikikrizrHtBJJAzArzrIsRCITKSS099ijrAJS____Qg99habbCAYrDzh00E0c0b4zd5pUAi6w0000000000018h00004x004h4h4h4h400p23PFB-3ka523Eka61ka52BgEkd0ChW6gEka2pjE9yW521EQqcxSaxgAG50RZlgEkW52wnVstf86LAhUL8sCEka52xgEka52xgEka5qxgEka52xgEka52xgEo1gEka52xgEka52xgEk9axgEka52xgEka0J0mxPrx6ykMiCkXQ-0G05czNaAWd6zhEQo2iEQqd6zhMqDhEQqd6z1Rqd6zhEQg2FB-nyoLj54a50FFyO0JmxkEAtgF00|https://file.garden/as5rmSxwvPYQGpy3/IDFB%20Warm%20-%20synth_idfb_lead2l.wav|https://file.garden/as5rmSxwvPYQGpy3/IDFB%20SynthStr1%20-%20synth_idfb_leadl.wav

this is a whole lot better! but idk what advice to give