What should happen next in my manga

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#1

so im making a manga called endlock and uhhhhh i need help of what should happen next and btw kori is a bounty hunter(bad guy) isamu is a good guy and yugo is a good guy too so here is my script so what should happen next

  1. Then Kori tapped him in the back
  2. Then yugo got scared and looked back
  3. When he looked back, Kori did a strong punch, and Yugo blocked it with his katana and got knocked back
  4. then kori made a ice sword very sharp
  5. then he attack but yugo got up and attack and it hit each other sword and it kept did it for multiple times
  6. then kori spin his sword very fast and striked yugo when yugo got a bit weak
  7. but then isamu came up very fast and protected him
  8. then kori sword hit isamu hands and it was bleeding rapidly
  9. kori was shocked “huh!!!”
  10. “i never let a comrade get killed” said isamu
  11. “oh is that so!” said Kori
  12. then he raised his sword and said “THIS ENDS NOW!!!”
  13. then Kori used SHADOW clone JUTSU and as soon he used it he swapped and teleported to a nearby tree
  14. then Isamu made a sword using his metal Powers and sliced kori but he was a shadow clone so he disappeared as what shadow clones do
#2

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#3

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#4

Make David come in and say “aw seriously”
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#5

well this is a manga with no stickmans but humans so uhhhhh make something interesting happen

#6

Uhhhh I got no idea

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#7

yo why are they fighting though???

#8

because Kori is a bounty hunter hired by someone else to do his job for him while the villian(no spoilers) do something and the bounty hunter wants to kill them

#9

so can we get a scene of of the villain or some dark shadow or smth so we don’t know who it is telling him or doing over the phone? or sending a messenger???

#10

well Kori came to the villian place and wait there cuz the villian said “I’m gonna need you soon” then Kori waited and waited until the villian said to Kori to take down this guy showing him a picture

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then Kori went searching for them since he have super smell and he also have the power of a polar bear and super duper speed

#11

btw here is the updated script cuz I got some ideas

  1. Then Kori tapped him in the back
  2. Then yugo got scared and looked back
  3. When he looked back, Kori did a strong punch, and Yugo blocked it with his katana and got knocked back
  4. then kori made a ice sword very sharp
  5. then he attack but yugo got up and attack and it hit each other sword and it kept did it for multiple times
  6. then kori spin his sword very fast and striked yugo when yugo got a bit weak
  7. but then isamu came up very fast and protected him
  8. then kori sword hit isamu hands and it was bleeding rapidly
  9. kori was shocked “huh!!!”
  10. “i never let a comrade get killed” said isamu
  11. “oh is that so!” said Kori
  12. then he raised his sword and said “THIS ENDS NOW!!!”
  13. then Kori used SHADOW clone JUTSU and as soon he used it he swapped and teleport to a nearby tree
  14. then Isamu made a sword using his metal Powers and sliced Kori but he was a shadow clone so he disappeared as what shadow clones do
  15. “DAMMIT ANOTHER CLONE!!!”
  16. while Kori was standing on a tree Tetsuwan tried to do a sneak attack
  17. while Tetsuwan did a sneak attack Kori made a shadow clone and locate the shadow clone there and stood next to a tree and watch them fail and used “ICE FIELD JUTSU!!!”
  18. then the entire ground turned to ice
  19. then Tetsuwan hit one of Kori’s shadow clones and the shadow smirked as he dissolved to white smoke
  20. Then Tetsuwan fall to the ground and got hurt “OWWW!!!”
  21. While everyone else slipped and fall to the ground
  22. “WHAT THE HELL ANOTHER SHADOW CLONE!!!” Tetsuwan shouted in anger
  23. Then Kori angered and said "ENOUGH OF THESE GAMES, DIE (bad word)!!!
  24. Then Chikao looked at Kori and secretly used brain corruption Jutsu
  25. Then when Kori was about to use his jutsu he forgot
  26. then Kori got shocked “what the hell was that!”
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#12

is this like a Naruto type universe?

#13

yes but more intense

#14

wdym but more intense?

like do you mean more fights? or higher stakes?

#15

yeah more fights and has some dragon ball elements

#16

like fusion???

#17

no like forms

#18

like eight gates and kaioken?

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#19

yep something like that

#20

brb gotta go for around like 10 or 20 minutes

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